Here is a copy of the first draft of the script. This definately needs a few more drafts yet, and I am struggling with finding a good ending for the story. I've tried numourous endings now and I haven't been happy with any of them. The ending in this draft involves the main character eating someone's dog. It's very deus ex machina, which is not what I want. It has been very frustrating but I will carry on and hopefully something will come to me soon.
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